Story Starters 1/?

 Guys, Gals and everything in between!

So, for writing, we are doing a little side thing called 'Story Starters'. It's supposedly someone will make up a story and your going to have finish it. I did some sad, and messed up endings. It's not that sad but a lot involved death. So enjoy, this is part one out of ??.

Note: The ___ parts are names. You can pick anything, I just can't think of anything right now. x_x

Link(s): The Story Starter  

Starter --> Nico wakes up in hospital, both legs and both arms in plaster, his skateboard broken in two, and he doesn't know why... the only thing he can remember is walking up a massive hill and his skateboard and his dog.

My ending -->

Nico tried to move, but the plaster was too heavy for him to move. ‘Did I get injured while skating?’ he said under his breath.

Nothing really came to mind, if he tried really hard all that appears is just a blur.

He moves his head facing the left bedside table. His skateboard is still broken… Wait- where’s his dog?

That’s the only important thing right now.

Somebody probably took care of her while i’m here.

Nico had moved out of his home at the age of 16, he went to a boarding school. He had a wonderful roommate called, ___.

___ and Nico were best friends. Until the end.

After an hour or two of laying in a hospital bed. He tried again to sit up.. “Still not getting up sooner or later..”

Nico then saw a nurse come into the room, with both of his parents. Mr and Mrs ____ I’m very sorry.

Nico’s parents' eyes widened, Mrs ___ started bawling her eyes out. Nico knew that her mom was sensitive, but never this sensitive.

“Mom, I’m okay see!” He then shook his right arm. His father in the background was also crying. Wait- they were both crying..

This usually meant that something was DEFINITELY WRONG. We only called Mom ‘sensitive’ because she cries everytime they see an elderly person waiting by themselves.

But, dad.. He never cries, his soul is as hard as a wrong. Except when it comes to Mom, he’s a REAL sofie.

“GUYS! I’m OKAY! LOOK!!” Nico started shifting both his arms.

“WOAH!” Nico fell right through the hospital bed. ‘What the..?’ As far as Nico knew he couldn’t walk through things.

“AAH! Oof!” Then he started to fly up and he hit his bed on the ceiling.”Oww..”

Nico then looked down to where the nurse and his parents were. THen he saw himself in the bed. Lifeless. The heart-rate machine was off and so were the other things attached as well.

His eyes then widened, HE WAS A GHOST! He was freaking out! His parents couldn’t see him, but he could see him.

“WHERE IS HE!?” A voice yelled. It was ___. His best friend until the end. ____ then had tears rolling down his face.
Nico started to cry with him and his parents. The nurse started to tear-up as well.

Now Nico was a ghost, haunting the entire hospital. Well not haunting. What he would do is he would comfort the people who are in a lot of pain, or were on their last breaths.

Nico was a very helpful spirit. 

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Relfection:

This was okay, fun-sih. Nothing really to comment. No pros or cons :).

Question(s): Are there any errors in my work? How would you rate it? How would you end the story?